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2019-08-02 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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I think that Japan has some problems. We demanded an apology from Japan, but they didn’t admit their mistakes in the past. They are rather doing economic retaliation. They have to admit their mistakes and apologize to us. Korean people aren’t buying Japanese goods and traveling to Japan. Japan and Korea is close neighbors. So they should interact by helping each other. I don’t want this conflict long time, I want to have a good relation with Japan.

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I think that Japan has some problems.

>>CORRECT!
We demanded an apology from Japan, but they didn’t admit their mistakes in the past.

>>We demanded an apology from Japan, but they didn’t admit their past mistakes.
They are rather doing economic retaliation.

>> They are instead doing an economic retaliation.
They have to admit their mistakes and apologize to us.

>>CORRECT!
Korean people aren’t buying Japanese goods and traveling to Japan.

>>Koreans aren’t buying Japanese goods and are also not traveling to Japan.
Japan and Korea is close neighbors.

>> Japan and Korea are close neighbors.
So they should interact by helping each other.

>> So they should interact and help each other.
I don’t want this conflict long time, I want to have a good relation with Japan.

>>I don’t want this conflict to last longer, I want our country to have a good relation with Japan.

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