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2019-08-02 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi~~ Gemma!! I\'m really happy to restart my class with you. I expect to study with you from now on. I have a question. Can we study unit 16 on next monday class? Have a great weekend!! 1) Do you know what to do if there\'s a fire in the shop? : I have to call 119 and shout other people to help me. 2) Avoid making silly mistakes. 3) My parents wanted me to be home at 11 o\'clock. : But my parents wanted me to be home at 10 o\'clock. So I aslo asked my sons to come back home by 10 pm. Even though they insisted to extend the time. 4) I dream about building a big house. : I dream about building a house with a big library. 5) I\'m hoping to see Lisa.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms. [이름]. I was grateful to have met you today. I am looking forward to having great classes with you. Well, our first meeting was appreciable indeed~! ^^ Productive weekend ahead!

>>> TEACHER GEMMA
1) Do you know what to do if there\'s a fire in the shop?

>>> CORRECT

* I have to call 119 and shout / (call) other people to help me.
2) Avoid making silly mistakes.

>>> CORRECT
3) My parents wanted me to be home at 11 o\'clock.

>>> CORRECT

* But my parents wanted me to be home at 10 o\'clock. So I aslo asked my sons to come back home by 10 pm. (Oh, so having curfews in Korea are still common. :) )
4) I dream about building a big house.

>>> CORRECT

*I dream about building a house with a big library. (Wow, I like the library, but I would prefer to have a swimming pool~! ^^ )
5) I\'m hoping to see Lisa.

>>> CORRECT

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