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HOMEWORK: Is it important to give your partner a present? What for example?
I just half-agree to this opinion and sometime it will be changing.
because if i gave to present for someone, he or she will be adorable and making more good friendship.
In the contrary, if i didn\'t gave present, partner must be thinking that because we are best friend and recognized themselves.
For example, supposing that if i worked in office, to give a present is good illusion to every department.
Because, to helping each other, that will be in creased of personal ability.
My universal thinking that both two things is alright.
More thinking of this happened specially, I prefer that giving present to partner is better.
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because if i gave to present for someone, he or she will be adorable and making more good friendship.
In the contrary, if i didn\'t gave present, partner must be thinking that because we are best friend and recognized themselves.
For example, supposing that if i worked in office, to give a present is good illusion to every department.
More thinking of this happened specially, I prefer that giving present to partner is better.
I just half-agree to this opinion and sometime it will be changing.
>> I just half-agree with this opinion and as time goes by it can change.
because if i gave to present for someone, he or she will be adorable and making more good friendship.
>>Because if I gave a present to someone, he or she will be thankful and we will be good friends.
In the contrary, if i didn\'t gave present, partner must be thinking that because we are best friend and recognized themselves.
>>On the contrary, if I don\'t give present, my partner must be thinking that we recognized each other as best friends.
For example, supposing that if i worked in office, to give a present is good illusion to every department.
>>For example, supposed that if I worked in an office, giving a present is a good impression for every department.
Because, to helping each other, that will be in creased of personal ability.
>>Because helping each other, will increase our personal feelings.
My universal thinking that both two things is alright.
>> I think that both things are alright.
More thinking of this happened specially, I prefer that giving present to partner is better.
>>Thinking about this, I prefer giving a present to my partner.
OR
>>Thinking about this, I think that giving a present to my partner is better.
>>Thinking about this, I think that giving a present to my partner is better.
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