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Most of time, I spend my money on food because I like to eat delicious food. I think that everyone has a different plan for their money.
Some people like to spend their money on clothes and others like to spend money on their hobbies. In my case, I spend my money on food, clothes, and saving. I hope I can use more money on food. ㅠㅜ
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Most of time, I spend my money on food because I like to eat delicious food. >> Most of the time, I spend my money on food because I like to eat delicious food.
I think that everyone has a different plan for their money.
>> I think that everyone has a different plan for his/her own money.
Some people like to spend their money on clothes and others like to spend money on their hobbies.
Some people like to spend their money on clothes and others like to spend money on their hobbies.
>> Correct
In my case, I spend my money on food, clothes, and saving.
>> In my case, I spend my money on food, clothes, and savings.
I hope I can use more money on food.
>> Correct
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