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Homework : How do you feel about the use of animals for medical research?
It is very sensitive problem because human is named by thinking animal.
In the other way, scientist find out that how to substitute the other thing?
Usually, They used mouse and rat for research.
Because they are breeding well and duplicated in many experiment.
However, so many environment campaigners opposed to their research.
Because It can be abuse to animal secretly.
For month ago, i heard a news about animal abuse happened.
It is happened to illegal and sometimes they got black money from someone.
Important thing is that everyone should be noticed for animals.
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>>It is a very sensitive problem because humans are named as thinking animals.
In the other way, scientist find out that how to substitute the other thing?
>>In the other way, scientists are trying to find out how to substitute the other thing?
Usually, They used mouse and rat for research.
>>Usually, they use mouses and rats for research.
Because they are breeding well and duplicated in many experiment.
>>Because they are breeding well and can be duplicated in many experiments.
However, so many environment campaigners opposed to their research.
>>However, so many environment campaigners opposed their research.
Because It can be abuse to animal secretly.
>>Because secretly this can be an abuse to animals.
For month ago, i heard a news about animal abuse happened.
>>A month ago, I heard a news about animal abuse.
It is happened to illegal and sometimes they got black money from someone.
>>It is illegal and sometimes they got money from the black market from someone.
Important thing is that everyone should be noticed for animals.
>>The important thing is that everyone should be aware for the animals.
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