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강사 첨삭
Thank you so much for sending this composition. ^^
I do agree with you.
Sometimes young people are too entitled and act as if they know better than the elders. ^^
~~t. Ally
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I think that yong people more selfish than their prents and grandparents.
>> I think that young people are more selfish than their parents and grandparents.
The old days, people\'s family system was an extended family but these days, that turns into a nuclear family.
>> During the old days, people\'s family systems were extended families, but these days, those turned into nuclear families.
That\'s reason why I think that yong people more selfish than them.
>> That\'s the reason why I think that young people are more selfish than the older generation.
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