Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Are young people generally more selfish than their parents and grandparents? Why or why not?
I think young people are immature and thoughtless. So sometimes they are little rude behaviors for their parents.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! ^^
I agree with you.
I think young people are very rebellious.
But with the right amount of discipline, hopefully things will be better when they get older. ^^
~t. Ally
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I think young people are immature and thoughtless.
>> CORRECT!
So sometimes they are little rude behaviors for their parents.
>> So sometimes they are a little rude to their parents.
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