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In my opinion, some vegetarions think eating meat is animal abuse. And other vegetarians think eating meat is not good for health.so, nowadays becoming more vegetarians.
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In my opinion, some vegetarions think eating meat is animal abuse.
>>> In my opinion, some vegetarians think that eating meat is animal abuse.
And other vegetarians think eating meat is not good for health.
>>> Some vegetarians also think that eating meat is not good for their health.
so, nowadays becoming more vegetarians.
>>> So, nowadays, many people are becoming more vegetarians.
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