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HOMEWORK: Do you think it\'s disrespectful to argue with your elders? (why/why not)
First, information of argue means that discussing some one, That happen is good method.
But, if it is kind of dispute, This attitude is rude.
For example, We heard lot of discussion about the news.
Usually, They are saying about their opinion and also have agreement and disagreement.
According to this, Must be not bad in that situation.
They can say their opinion and the other person should be listen careful.
Important thing is consideration each other when people said about some thing.
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For example, We heard lot of discussion about the news.
According to this, Must be not bad in that situation.
First, information of argue means that discussing some one, That happen is good method.
>>First of, arguing means discussing with someone, that is a good method.
But, if it is kind of dispute, This attitude is rude.
>>But, if it would lead to a dispute, this kind of attitude is rude.
For example, We heard lot of discussion about the news.
>>For example, we can hear a lot of discussions in the news.
Usually, They are saying about their opinion and also have agreement and disagreement.
>>Usually, they are voicing out their opinion and they can also have some agreements and disagreements.
According to this, Must be not bad in that situation.
>>From this, it\'s not bad to be in that situation.
They can say their opinion and the other person should be listen careful.
>>They can say their opinion and the other person should listen carefully.
Important thing is consideration each other when people said about some thing.
>>The important thing is considering each others opinion when people say something.
>>The important thing is considering each others opinion when people say something.
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