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I don’t have the plan for my summer vacation yet because I’m busy with studying IELTS. If I get IELTS score, I will travel to Vietnam. My younger sister considers to working in Vietnam as the manager of company. She leaves to Vietnam in October and will make buckle and tongue meet there. And then I and my father will go there to meet my sister and relax. Vietnam is well known as rice noodle and beautiful beaches. I look forward to trip in Vietnam and my sister get on with their friends.
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Hello Luna. Thank you for this. I\'ve never been to Vietnam before but I\'ve heard good things about it too.
- T. Beth
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I don’t have the plan for my summer vacation yet because I’m busy with studying IELTS. >>> I don’t have a plan for my summer vacation yet because I’m busy with studying IELTS.
If I get IELTS score, I will travel to Vietnam.
>>> correct.
>>> OR: If I finally get my IELTS score, I will travel to Vietnam.
My younger sister considers to working in Vietnam as the manager of company.
>>> My younger sister considers to work in Vietnam as the manager of a company.
>>> OR: My younger sister is considering working in Vietnam as the manager of a company.
She leaves to Vietnam in October and will make buckle and tongue meet there.
>>> She leaves for Vietnam in October and will make buckle and tongue meet there.
And then I and my father will go there to meet my sister and relax.
>>> correct
Vietnam is well known as rice noodle and beautiful beaches.
>>> Vietnam is well known for rice noodle and beautiful beaches.
I look forward to trip in Vietnam and my sister get on with their friends.
>>> I look forward to gong on a trip in Vietnam and for my sister to get along with her friends.
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