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When i child my favorite season is winter.
It\'s because, in winter i play with my dad and older brother.
Making snowman together.
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When i child my favorite season is winter.
>>>Since I was a child, my favorite season is winter.
OR>> My my favorite season is winter since I was a child.
It\'s because, in winter i play with my dad and older brother.
>>>It\'s because in winter, I usually play with my dad and older brother.
Making snowman together.
>>> We make a snowman together.
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