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What are the things that you would add to your hobbies?
I appreciate your kind editing on my poor sentences.
I love to travel regardless of whether my country or other countries. If I could have health, money and time, I would like to add trip as my hobby.
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Hello Bella,
It has been so great hearing your answers to each question I gave you. Honestly, your way of dealing with the questions are getting better. You\'re not simply answering it but your thinking about it on a greater way. Again, keep improving!
Sincerely,
Teacher Annie
What are the things that you would add to your hobbies?
I appreciate your kind editing on my poor sentences.
I appreciate your kind editing on my poor sentences.
>>>I appreciate your effort and your kindness in editing my poor sentences.
(Always welcome Bella.)
I love to travel regardless of whether my country or other countries.
I love to travel regardless of whether my country or other countries.
>>>I love to travel on my country or abroad, anywhere is really fine.
If I could have health, money and time, I would like to add trip as my hobby.
>>>I could have money, time and good health then I would go on a trip every time and I\'ll add it to my hobbies.
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