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2019-08-08 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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Do you want to visit to Korea? If we ever are lose it\'s fine because I belie e that we will be better than now. Tell me which one do you like more? Speaking of Korea all of things is very fast, having fun a lot of things and delicious foods. What a wonderful day. Any plans do you have?

강사 첨삭

Thank you [이름]!


~Teacher Lucy


Do you want to visit to Korea?

>>Do you want to visit Korea?

 If we ever are lose it\'s fine because I belie e that we will be better than now. 

>>If we lose it\'s fine because I believe we\'ll be better.

 Tell me which one do you like more.

>>CORRECT!

>>Tell me why you like it.

 Speaking of Korea all of things is very fast, having fun a lot of things and delicious foods.

>>Speaking of Korea all things ARE very fast, having fun with lot of things and delicious foods.


 What a wonderful day.

>>CORRECT!

>>What an amazing day!

 Any plans do you have?

>>Any plan you have?

>>Do you have any plans?



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