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2019-08-08 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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What do you think about investing money on the stock market? Have you tried it before? Will you recommend this method of investment to other people? yes, I\'ve invested a lot of money but I lost lots of money. I think stock market is very dangerous. I don\'t want to recommend investing money. one of the best way is save your money in a bank.

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Hi, [이름]!

Oh my. :(

I hope you\'re okay.

I agree with you.

It\'s very risky, and you need to be extremely careful about making investments.

Thank you so much for sharing with me! ^^

~t. Ally

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yes, I\'ve invested a lot of money but I lost lots of money.

>> yes, I\'ve invested a lot of money. But, I\'ve also lost a lot.

I think stock market is very dangerous. I don\'t want to recommend investing money.

>> I think the stock market is very dangerous. I don\'t recommend investing money in the stock market.

one of the best way is save your money in a bank.

>> One of the best ways to save money is to put it in a bank.

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