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I have learned about the stock.
But I haven\'t tried investing money on the stock market.
Because professor said me, to invest money on the stock market is to do zero-sum game.
If you gain money, someone will be lost money.
So I don\'t investing the stock.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
It\'s a very risky game to play.
I think it\'s good that you didn\'t invest in the stock market. ^^
~t. Ally
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I have learned about the stock.
>> I have learned about the stock market.
But I haven\'t tried investing money on the stock market.
>> CORRECT!
Because professor said me, to invest money on the stock market is to do zero-sum game.
>> Because my professor told me that investing in stocks is a zero- sum game.
If you gain money, someone will be lost money.
>> When you gain money, someone else loses money.
So I don\'t investing the stock.
>>So I don\'t want to invest in stocks.
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