homework
학생이 쓴 원문
-What is the most important thing to succeed in life?- (^-^)
I am sure that to succeed in life , Do what you never regret until you die.
Success in life is a very abstract subject.
If I am satisfied with my life and I have not regretted what I had done. I can say that my life is successful.
Even if I have great property and fames, I can feel that my life is full of mistakes and regrets. that life is not successful life.
Success in life does not mean how much you have and how much you are important person in the world.
I will not say who is more successful in his/her life comparing a president with a normal house wife.
Teacher Jedah says, live just like you will die tomorrow, and learn just like you will never die (?)
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for spending a little of your time with your homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
You are such a brilliant woman with awesome thoughts! I totally agree with you. It is really hard to define one\'s success. For some success is simply having a family and raising good children, for some it could be all about material things. But, as I have read; for better success in life the most important things are patience and to remain focus. If you are happy with your life, no matter what, you are successful. Work hard, have focus, be patient, be humble and see things in a positive attitude. Everything will come our way. ^ ^
I am sure that to succeed in life , do what you never regret until you die.
>>Correct
Success in life is a very abstract subject.
Success in life is a very abstract subject.
>>Correct
If I am satisfied with my life and I have not regretted what I had done, I can say that my life is successful.
If I am satisfied with my life and I have not regretted what I had done, I can say that my life is successful.
>>Correct
Even if I have great property and fames, I can feel that my life is full of mistakes and regrets. that life is not successful life.
Even if I have great property and fames, I can feel that my life is full of mistakes and regrets. that life is not successful life.
>>Even if I have great properties and fame, but I can feel that my life is full of mistakes and regrets; then I can not say that I have a successful life.
Success in life does not mean how much you have and how much you are important person in the world.
Success in life does not mean how much you have and how much you are important person in the world.
>>Success in life does not mean how much you have and how much important person you are in the world.
I will not say who is more successful in his/her life comparing a president with a normal house wife.
I will not say who is more successful in his/her life comparing a president with a normal house wife.
>>I can not tell who is more successful if I\'m to compare a president to an ordinary house wife.
Teacher Jedah says, live just like you will die tomorrow, and learn just like you will never die (?)
Teacher Jedah says, live just like you will die tomorrow, and learn just like you will never die (?)
>>Correct! (but I\'m not sure if I was the one who told you this one! ^ ^)
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