Homework
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If you could only watch one genre of movies for the rest of your life, what would it be?
If i could only watch one genre of movies for the rest of my life, i would watch the science fiction moives.
Because whenever i watch the SF moives, i was always amazed by the unique topics and imagination. It helps to improve my imagination.
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Hi [이름]! ^ ^ Thank you so much for spending a little time with your homework. I really appreciate the effort! ^ ^
Nice thoughts on this one. But maybe next time, you can elaborate more! ^^
-Teacher Jedah
>>If I could only watch one genre of movies for the rest of my life, I would watch science fiction movies. (don\'t forget to capitalize your \"I\" ^ ^ and you have misspelled \"movies\")
Because whenever i watch the SF moives, i was always amazed by the unique topics and imagination.
>>Because whenever I watch SF movies, I am always amazed by the unique topics and imagination.
It helps to improve my imagination.
>>It helps improve my imagination.
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