Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
My grandfather is the oldest person I know.
But he passed away a month ago.
He said that you should always study hard.
He believed that studying was the only way to make a good life.
I know that but I don\'t agree with that.
There’s saying, “Happiness does not come in grade”.
I think studying is not everything in my life.
It is important to do what I like, what I want to do.
I think that is the way to enjoy life.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ellen! Thank you so much for spending time with your homework. I really appreciate your effort! ^^
Wow! All good sentences! Congratulations! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>CORRECT
But he passed away a month ago.
But he passed away a month ago.
>>CORRECT
He said that you should always study hard.
He said that you should always study hard.
>>CORRECT or
>>He told me that I should always study hard.
He believed that studying was the only way to make a good life.
He believed that studying was the only way to make a good life.
>>CORRECT
>>He believed that studying is the only way to make a good life.
I know that but I don\'t agree with that.
I know that but I don\'t agree with that.
>>CORRECT
There’s saying, “Happiness does not come in grade”.
There’s saying, “Happiness does not come in grade”.
>>CORRECT or
>>Happiness is not all about having good grades or excelling in school.
I think studying is not everything in my life.
I think studying is not everything in my life.
>>CORRECT
It is important to do what I like, what I want to do.
It is important to do what I like, what I want to do.
>>CORRECT
I think that is the way to enjoy life.
I think that is the way to enjoy life.
>>CORRECT
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