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Recently I bought a hair conditioner.
After using it, I felt that my hair was gotten a better hair texture.
If I use all this product, I will buy same things.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Yes, hair care is truly important!
Especially in Korea. ^^
Your weather is very hot and humid, and I believe it makes your hair dry.
That\'s a nice product! ^^
~~t. Ally
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Recently I bought a hair conditioner.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> I recently bought a hair conditioner.
After using it, I felt that my hair was gotten a better hair texture.
>> After using iy, I felt that my hair has gotten a better texture.
If I use all this product, I will buy same things.
>> If I use up all this product, I will buy the same one.
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