homework
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-Who is the oldest person you know? How is their view of the world different than yours?- (^-^)
She is 65 years old. I have known her for 8years.
We met at swimming lessons.
I tried to be her firends until last year.
It is a littel bit difficult to keep company with her like my other friends to me.
She dose not want to show her what she is and she hide her own opinion when I ask her thoughts.
I think, probably, she does not want to argue with me. ( for this reason, I don\'t know how she is her view of the world)
To tell the truth, I became getting bored with her when I met her, So I just say hello when I meet her at a swimming pool thesedays.
But I am sure that she is still my friend.
Someday, when I get old like her age, I may know why she always hide her feeling.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for devoting a little of your time with your homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this one. Maybe it has something to do with her upbringing, her background and her experiences. And of course the generation gap. ^ ^
She is 65 years old.
>>Correct
I have known her for 8 years.
>>Correct
We met at swimming lessons.
We met at swimming lessons.
>>We met at the swimming class.
I tried to be her firends until last year.
I tried to be her firends until last year.
>>I tried to be her friend until last year.
It is a littel bit difficult to keep company with her like my other friends to me.
It is a littel bit difficult to keep company with her like my other friends to me.
>>It is a little bit difficult to keep her company unlike with my other friends.
She dose not want to show her what she is and she hide her own opinion when I ask her thoughts.
She dose not want to show her what she is and she hide her own opinion when I ask her thoughts.
>>She does not want to show the real her and she hides her thoughts and emotions.
I think, probably, she does not want to argue with me.
I think, probably, she does not want to argue with me.
>>Correct
( for this reason, I don\'t know how she is her view of the world)
>>For this reason, I don\'t know her views about the world.
To tell the truth, I became getting bored with her when I met her,
To tell the truth, I became getting bored with her when I met her,
>>To tell you the truth, I got bored with her.
So I just say hello when I meet her at a swimming pool thesedays.
>So these days, I just greet her \"Hello\" when I see her at the swimming pool.
But I am sure that she is still my friend.
But I am sure that she is still my friend.
>>Correct
Someday, when I get old like her age, I may know why she always hide her feeling.
Someday, when I get old like her age, I may know why she always hide her feeling.
>>Someday, when I get to be like her age, I may understand why she always hides her feelings.
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