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2019-08-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Jedah! I know you are not at the office now. You may read this homework tomorrow morning. It is raining in my place now. With this rain, It is not hot and it is so good mood to drink a hot cup of coffee. I have been drinking ice coffee thesedays because of hot whether. I am really happy to drink a hot coffee on this raining day. Anyway, I have still 3 homeworks to do so, I wrote this. Have a cup of coffee and enjoy the coffee aroma. See you later!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you so much! You are such a wonderful, awesome and a very thoughtful woman.

I know this is not your homework, but we are still required to make the necessary corrections. But thank you! I really appreciate you! ^ ^ And, don\'t worry about your homework. It\'s okay! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

I know you are not at the office now.

>>Correct
You may read this homework tomorrow morning.

>>Correct
It is raining in my place now.

>>Correct
With this rain, It is not hot and it is so good mood to drink a hot cup of coffee.

>>With this rain, it\'s not so hot and it\'s a good time to drink a hot cup of coffee.
I have been drinking ice coffee thesedays because of hot whether.

>>I have been drinking iced coffee these days because of the hot weather.
I am really happy to drink a hot coffee on this raining day.

>>I am really happy that I could drink a hot coffee this rainy day.
Anyway, I have still 3 homeworks to do so, I wrote this.

>>Anyway, I still have three homework to go, so I wrote this.
Have a cup of coffee and enjoy the coffee aroma.

>>Correct

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