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HOMEWORK: What do you think are some important things parents can do for teenagers?
First, Teenagers is not adult not yet.
So, Parents can be advised them to their own opportunity.
If teenagers don\'t have [이름]d to doing study, Their can be acquire some technology or special skill.
But, i disagreed that if teenager going to work.
Teenager is season that growing a lots and eating many food.
Not recently Almost parents can do for teenagers lot of things.
So, It can be caused that teenagers are getting worse their self-power or own ability.
But This one this is exactly true. We must be respect our parents.
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So, Parents can be advised them to their own opportunity.
First, Teenagers is not adult not yet.
>>First, teenagers are not adults yet.
>>So, parents can advise them if the opportunity comes.
If teenagers don\'t have [이름]d to doing study, Their can be acquire some technology or special skill.
>>If teenagers don\'t have the [이름]d to study, they can acquire some new technology or a special skill.
But, i disagreed that if teenager going to work.
>>But, I disagree with the idea that teenagers should go to work.
Teenager is season that growing a lots and eating many food.
>>Being a teenager is the season of growing with lots of opportunities and to eat different kinds of food.
Not recently Almost parents can do for teenagers lot of things.
>>Almost all parents can do a lot of things for teenagers.
So, It can be caused that teenagers are getting worse their self-power or own ability.
>>So because of that, the attitude of teenagers are getting worse.
But This one this is exactly true. We must be respect our parents.
>>But this one is exactly true. We must respect our parents.
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