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2019-08-13 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

학생이 쓴 원문

What do you want most in a friend? When I was younger, I did\'t choose a friend. My old friends and I became closer naturally. The time made us friend. There was no barrier in front of youth. But now, it was changed. As I\'m getting older, I try to choose a person who speaks the smae language and same feeling as a friend. It is so sad that I became a calculative person. In other word, I don\'t want to waste my time to compromise the tastes each other. Anyway, same taste is the most important thing between my friend and I.

강사 첨삭

Thanks Ms. [이름]~! ^^ Enjoy your day!

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

What do you want most in a friend?

When I was younger, I did\'t choose a friend.

>>> When I was younger, I didn\'t choose my friends.
My old friends and I became closer naturally. 

>>>My old friends and I became closer eventually. 
The time made us friend.

>>> The time made us friends.

There was no barrier in front of youth.

>>>There was no barrier during our childhood.
But now, it was changed.

>>> CORRECT 
As I\'m getting older, I try to choose a person who speaks the same language and same feeling as a friend.

>>> CORRECT 
It is so sad that I became a calculative person.

>>> CORRECT 
 In other words, I don\'t want to waste my time to compromise the tastes of others.

>>> CORRECT 
 Anyway, same taste is the most important thing between my friend and I.

>>> CORRECT 

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