homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
What do you want most in a friend?
When I was younger, I did\'t choose a friend.
>>> When I was younger, I didn\'t choose my friends.
My old friends and I became closer naturally.
>>>My old friends and I became closer eventually.
The time made us friend.
>>> The time made us friends.
There was no barrier in front of youth.
>>>There was no barrier during our childhood.
But now, it was changed.
>>> CORRECT
As I\'m getting older, I try to choose a person who speaks the same language and same feeling as a friend.
>>> CORRECT
It is so sad that I became a calculative person.
>>> CORRECT
In other words, I don\'t want to waste my time to compromise the tastes of others.
>>> CORRECT
Anyway, same taste is the most important thing between my friend and I.
>>> CORRECT
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