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2019-08-13 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Hi Glenda teacher. It was nice to meet you. Its was first time our class. so I was a little nervous. Acutually I tend to be shy and quite. but if someone are getting closer, I change easygoing person. ^^ um... I thnink my strenghts are quick-tempered and meticulous. also people tell me that I am considerate. ^^; and I strongly dislike selfish peole. Finally I am afraid of new challenges. I don\'t like to challenge new things. I think this is the beggest personality flaw.

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Hi Glenda teacher.
It was nice to meet you. 

>> Correct :)
 Its was first time our class. so I was a little nervous. Acutually I tend to be shy and quite. 
Correct :)

>> It was the first day of our class so, I was a little nervous.
 but if someone are getting closer, I change easygoing person. ^^
um...

>> But if I get closer to someone, I change to be an easy going person.
 I thnink my strenghts are quick-tempered and meticulous. also people tell me that I am considerate. ^^;
and I strongly dislike selfish peole. 

>> I think, my strengths are being quick-tempered and meticulous. Also, people tell me that I am considerate.
 Finally I am afraid of new challenges. I don\'t like to challenge new things. I think this is the beggest personality flaw.

>> Finally, I am afraid of ne challenges. I don\'t like to challenge new things. I think this is my biggest personality flaw.

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