homework
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HOMEWORK: Do you [이름]d the presence of pets when you study?
Yes, because, living with pets is made your life more better with study.
But, I have a allergy from cats or dog.
I think that my respiratory organs is not good.
So, if i stand around pets, i caused lots of caught.
I hope that I need a pets because i\'m only child.
If i lived with pets, Always i\'m happy and enjoying.
However, Your pets annoying you when you studying, You little tired.
A number of 1/5 Korean people lived with their pets, So if i gave a chance, I want to breed pets.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
Yes, because, living with pets is made your life more better with study.
>>Yes, because living with can make your life more better.
>>But, I have dog allergy and cat allergy.
I think that my respiratory organs is not good.
>>CORRECT
So, if i stand around pets, i caused lots of caught.
>>So, if I am around pets, I will cough.
I hope that I need a pets because i\'m only child.
>>I hope that I can have pets because I\'m an only child.
If i lived with pets, Always i\'m happy and enjoying.
>>If I lived with my pets, I will always enjoy and be happy.
However, Your pets annoying you when you studying, You little tired.
>>However, pets are annoying when you are studying, you will be tired.
A number of 1/5 Korean people lived with their pets, So if i gave a chance, I want to breed pets.
>> 1/5 of the Korean population are living with their pets, so if I would be given a chance, I want to breed pets.
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