homework
학생이 쓴 원문
-Do you enjoy learning new things? Give an example if you can.- (^-^)
When I decided learning playing golf as a new year resolution in this year, I wanted to be humble and come back to the mind of begginer because I felt I am so lazy.
As I am getting older, I know everything about how to work, how to live and how to manage my life.
I felt my life is stagnant water.
I am still beginner in playing golf so, I am trying to be a good student and to be deligent to learn.
Now I am sure that learning playing golf was a very good opportunity to make me alive again.
With this experience, I am thinking what I will learn another thing coming next year.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for this homework. I really appreciate it a lot! ^^
It\'s my desire to always try to learn something new. It\'s not only good for me but also for my mental state and being. I\'m glad you feel the same as I do. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
When I decided learning playing golf as a new year resolution in this year, I wanted to be humble and come back to the mind of begginer because I felt I am so lazy.
>>When I decided to learn how to play golf, I wanted to be humble and start as a beginner because I felt that I am so lazy.
As I am getting older, I know everything about how to work, how to live and how to manage my life.
As I am getting older, I know everything about how to work, how to live and how to manage my life.
>>As I am getting older, I\'m knowing everything about how to work, how to live and how to manage my life.
I felt my life is stagnant water.
I felt my life is stagnant water.
>>I felt my life is just like a stagnant water.
I am still beginner in playing golf so, I am trying to be a good student and to be deligent to learn.
I am still beginner in playing golf so, I am trying to be a good student and to be deligent to learn.
>>I am still a beginner in playing golf so, I am trying to be a good student and to be diligent with learning.
Now I am sure that learning playing golf was a very good opportunity to make me alive again.
Now I am sure that learning playing golf was a very good opportunity to make me alive again.
>>Now I am sure that learning golf is a very good opportunity to make me feel alive again.
With this experience, I am thinking what I will learn another thing coming next year.
With this experience, I am thinking what I will learn another thing coming next year.
>>With this experience, I\'m considering of learning something for the coming year.
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