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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Jedah!
I told you about the funneral today.
When I heard someone died, I used to imagine about my death like the novel \' A Christmas Carol\'
I am sure that you know the novel. An old man Scrooge went to the his past, present and his future on Christams day.
When Scrooge went to his future, he found his dead body. No one felt sad about his death,moreover people stole his money with cursing. ( Is that right? hihi)
It comes to me a nightmare if there is no one in my funneral only my husband is standing and crying alone.
I am not a person who think about death frequently. but I cannot help but thinking about death because of I am not immortal.
Well, I am so sorry to say about death. I hope I don\'t make worse your headache.
See you Jedah!!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts about death. Yes, I\'m quite familiar with that story. It\'s really sad to think about death and even sadder if no one comes to visit. But, don\'t fret, we are good people. I\'m sure a lot of people will come and pay their respects because we are loved and admired! ^^
-Teacher Jedah
I told you about the funneral today.
>>Correct (misspelled \"funeral\")
When I heard someone died, I used to imagine about my death like the novel \' A Christmas Carol\'
When I heard someone died, I used to imagine about my death like the novel \' A Christmas Carol\'
>>When I hear someone die, I imagine about my death like the novel \' A Christmas Carol\'
I am sure that you know the novel.
I am sure that you know the novel.
>>Correct
An old man Scrooge went to the his past, present and his future on Christams day.
>>An old man named Scrooge went to his past, present and his future on Christmas day.
When Scrooge went to his future, he found his dead body.
When Scrooge went to his future, he found his dead body.
>>Correct
No one felt sad about his death,moreover people stole his money with cursing. ( Is that right? hihi)
>>No one felt sad about his death,moreover people stole his money and were even cursing. (I hope I got this one right! ^ ^)
It comes to me a nightmare if there is no one in my funneral only my husband is standing and crying alone.
It comes to me a nightmare if there is no one in my funneral only my husband is standing and crying alone.
>>It comes to me as a nightmare if there is no one in my funeral and only my husband is standing and crying alone.
I am not a person who think about death frequently. but I cannot help but thinking about death because of I am not immortal.
I am not a person who think about death frequently. but I cannot help but thinking about death because of I am not immortal.
>>I am not a person who thinks about death frequently, but I cannot help but to think about death because I am not immortal.
Well, I am so sorry to say about death.
Well, I am so sorry to say about death.
>>Well, I am so sorry to talk about death.
I hope I don\'t make worse your headache.
>>I hope I am not making your headache worse.
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