Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What are the things that makes you feel good? At least give me three and why do they make you feel good.
After excercise and shower, I feel a lot of happiness . I don\'t like exercise but I have been doing it for my health. I think I get health when I finished workout.
When my family (especially my daughters) are happy, I am happy too. I am sure every mothers in the world have the same mind.
I think I feel good when I become influence in English. I hope I will experience it someday.
I feel good when I have a chat with my friend while drinking coffee.
강사 첨삭
Hello Bella,
As always, your answers are always improving. Your ideas continues to widen.
Continue towards improvement Bella. Thank you for answering this.
Sincerely,
Teacher Annie
What are the things that makes you feel good? At least give me three and why do they make you feel good.
After excercise and shower, I feel a lot of happiness .
>>>After exercising and taking a shower, I feel a lot of happiness.
I don\'t like exercise but I have been doing it for my health.
>>>I don\'t like exercising but I have been doing it for my health.
I think I get health when I finished workout.
>>>I think I will have good health when I continue to exercise.
When my family (especially my daughters) are happy, I am happy too.
When my family (especially my daughters) are happy, I am happy too.
>>>>When my family are happy, I\'m also happy; especially when my daughters are having a great life.
I am sure every mothers in the world have the same mind.
>>>CORRECT
OR>>I am sure every mothers in the world have the same in mind.
I think I feel good when I become influence in English. I hope I will experience it someday.
I think I feel good when I become influence in English. I hope I will experience it someday.
>>>I think I will feel good when I\'m influenced in English, I hope to experience it someday.
I feel good when I have a chat with my friend while drinking coffee.
I feel good when I have a chat with my friend while drinking coffee.
>>>I feel good when I chat with my friends while drinking coffee
OR>>>I feel good when I chat with my friends over a cup of coffee.
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