homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Good Morning Jedah!
I postpone today\'s class. hihi. So here is my presents for you because you will not busy today .
What is it? It is a~~~~~~~~ scarey story.
I try to translate in English for you. Enjoy it!
A man lost his way in a mountain and he found a old house.
It was getting dark so he decided to stay the house that night.
When he opened the house, he found that there is no one.
It was so dark inside so he turend his flashlight to search if something is inside of the house.
He found that there were many portraits on the wall and looked around the portraits.
He thoughts that it is wired because all the people on the paintings are smiling.
He felt so tired and fell asleep soon.
When he woke up in the next moring, he couldn\'t move with fear.
Because~~~
There were many windows instead of portraits.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^ ^ Oh my goodness! This story gave me the chills! I\'m already feeling cold because of the weather and you even made me feel colder with this! What\'s wrong with you?! Just kidding! ^ ^
I really appreciate your thoughtfulness [이름]! Thank you so much! I hope you will enjoy your holiday! ^ ^ Talk to you soon! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
A man lost his way in a mountain and he found a old house.
>>A man lost his way in a mountain and he found an old house.
It was getting dark so he decided to stay the house that night.
It was getting dark so he decided to stay the house that night.
>>It was getting dark so he decided to stay in that house for the night.
When he opened the house, he found that there is no one.
When he opened the house, he found that there is no one.
>>When he opened the door, he found that nobody\'s home.
It was so dark inside so he turend his flashlight to search if something is inside of the house.
It was so dark inside so he turend his flashlight to search if something is inside of the house.
>>It was so dark inside so he turned his flashlight on to search if there is something /someone inside the house.
He found that there were many portraits on the wall and looked around the portraits.
He found that there were many portraits on the wall and looked around the portraits.
>>He found that there were many portraits on the wall and looked at each of the portraits.
He thoughts that it is wired because all the people on the paintings are smiling.
He thoughts that it is wired because all the people on the paintings are smiling.
>>He thought that it\'s strange because all the people on the paintings are smiling.
He felt so tired and fell asleep soon.
He felt so tired and fell asleep soon.
>>CORRECT
When he woke up in the next moring, he couldn\'t move with fear.
When he woke up in the next moring, he couldn\'t move with fear.
>>When he woke up the next morning, he couldn\'t move with fear.
Because~~~
There were many windows instead of portraits.
Because~~~
There were many windows instead of portraits.
>>CORRECT
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