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학생이 쓴 원문
Hihihi, Did you enjoy the story?
Are you scare? ^^
Here is one more story.
A man moved to an apartment which is very old.
After he unpacked his stuffs, he looked around the apartment and went up to the rooftop.
There was a little boy sitting alone and counting a number.
\" 98,98,98,98,,,,,,\"
The boy repeated 98 agian and again.
The man felt wired but he said to the boy hello.
The boy looked at him and said with pointing downward.
\" Look down \"
He went to the edge of the rooftop where the boy pointed to see what it is.
When he looked down , the boy ran to him and pushed the man to the downward.
And the boy said.
\"99\"
I hope you are alright.
Actually, Korean like to hear scarey stories in hot summer to remove hot fever.
It really makes goos bumps altough it is short story.
Have a nice day~
See you tomorrow!!!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Aha! So you decided to scare me more! Such a naughty woman you are! ^ ^
This one is scary too! ^ ^ Thank you [이름]! Talk to you tomorrow! ^ ^
A man moved to an apartment which is very old.
>>CORRECT
After he unpacked his stuffs, he looked around the apartment and went up to the rooftop.
After he unpacked his stuffs, he looked around the apartment and went up to the rooftop.
>>CORRECT
There was a little boy sitting alone and counting a number.
\" 98,98,98,98,,,,,,\"
There was a little boy sitting alone and counting a number.
\" 98,98,98,98,,,,,,\"
>>There was a little boy sitting alone and kept on repeating the same number.
The boy repeated 98 agian and again.
The boy repeated 98 agian and again.
>>CORRECT (misspelled \"again\")
The man felt wired but he said to the boy hello.
The man felt wired but he said to the boy hello.
>>The man felt strange but still said \"hello\" to the boy.
The boy looked at him and said with pointing downward.
\" Look down \"
The boy looked at him and said with pointing downward.
\" Look down \"
>>The boy looked at him and pointed downwards.
He went to the edge of the rooftop where the boy pointed to see what it is.
He went to the edge of the rooftop where the boy pointed to see what it is.
>>CORRECT
When he looked down , the boy ran to him and pushed the man to the downward.
When he looked down , the boy ran to him and pushed the man to the downward.
>>When he looked down , the boy ran to him and pushed him!
And the boy said.
\"99\"
And the boy said.
\"99\"
>>CORRECT
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