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In my opinions vegetarians and vegans are does not not help for environment.
It\'s because vegetarians and vegans are not many in the world.
So, vegetarians and vegans are not good things.
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In my opinions vegetarians and vegans are does not not help for environment.
>>> In my opinion, vegetarians or vegans do not help the environment.
It\'s because vegetarians and vegans are not many in the world.
It\'s because vegetarians and vegans are not many in the world.
>>> It\'s because there are only few vegetarians or vegans in the world.
So, vegetarians and vegans are not good things.
So, vegetarians and vegans are not good things.
>>> So, being a vegetarian or vegan is not a good thing.
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