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2019-08-15 · 첨삭 강사 Selene

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In my opinions if someone says bad things about my friend, i am so angry. It\'s because, maybe they aren\'t well know my friend. So i will say why you say my friend is bad?.

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In my opinions if someone says bad things about my friend, i am so angry.
>>>In my opinion, if someone says bad things about my friend, I would be so angry.
It\'s because, maybe they aren\'t well know my friend.
>>> It\'s because maybe they don\'t know my friend very well.
So i will say why you say my friend is bad?.
>>>So, I will tell them that why are they saying bad things about my friend.

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