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The nearest future, I will finish the project in Malaysia until next Feb successfully.

>>The nearest future, I will successfully finish the project in Malaysia until February of next year.

When I arrive home, I will try to do voluntary service during weekend, and meet spouse who has warm hart and charming eyes there.
>>When I will arrive home, I will try to do voluntary services during the weekend and look for a spouse who has a warm heart and charming eyes.
I will get married with her when I reaches 35 years old and go to honeymoon somewhere to help starvation people if she agrees that to make our honeymoon something special.

>>I will get married with her when I reach the age of 35 and go somewhere for our honeymoon where we can help starving people if she agrees to make our honeymoon something special.
I wish I live 80 years old.

>>I wish to live until the age of 80.

Thus, I want to work until 60 years because I will spend left life for traveling.

>>Thus, I want to work until 60 years old because I will spend the rest of my life travelling.
After journey, I will color all the cities in Korea which I will have visited on map for 10 years.
>>After the journey, I will mark all the cities in Korea in the map which I visited for 10 years.
I will spend my time at the country side which has ocean view, two floors, 5 rooms, 2 bathrooms and garden with a dog and a cat.

>>I will spend my time at the countryside which has an ocean view, two floors, 5 rooms, 2 bathrooms and garden with a dog and a cat.
 After retirement, I will make money because I will rent houses for monthly rent.

>> After retirement, I will make money through owning some houses for rent.
Thus, I will have gotten more than 2 houses.
>>Thus, I will have more than 2 houses.
Since I don\'t want to have kids, I will donate all of my properties for orphans after me and my wife is gone.

>> Since I don\'t want to have kids, I will donate all of my properties to the orphans after me and my wife are gone.