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HOMEWORK: Can you talk to your parents about everything?
Haha not sure... because although we are family, i have a private problems.
So, Not can tell everything but Almost story convey my parents.
If i had a wrong situation, I can pass though that myself.
But If i need a parents power, after that Usually telling them.
For example, These about story like when i suffered in military do not telling them.
Or story about fighting my friends, tiny mistakes, like these.
But I think that to telling everything with your parents is more safety.
Parents can advice to you, and unless bad situation that sharing your hurts.
Same as i do, Almost telling to parents everything honestly.
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Or story about fighting my friends, tiny mistakes, like these.
But I think that to telling everything with your parents is more safety.
Parents can advice to you, and unless bad situation that sharing your hurts.
Same as i do, Almost telling to parents everything honestly.
Haha not sure... because although we are family, i have a private problems.
>>Haha not sure... Because although we are a family, I have some private problems.
So, Not can tell everything but Almost story convey my parents.
>>So, I cannot tell almost everything to my parents.
If i had a wrong situation, I can pass though that myself.
>>If I\'m in a wrong situation, I can pass though that myself.
But If i need a parents power, after that Usually telling them.
>>But if I need my parent\'s help, after that I usually tell them.
For example, These about story like when i suffered in military do not telling them.
>>For example, it\'s about a story like when I suffered in the military I did not tell them.
Or story about fighting my friends, tiny mistakes, like these.
>>Or stories about fighting with my friends, tiny mistakes, like these.
But I think that to telling everything with your parents is more safety.
>>But I think that telling everything with your parents is safer.
Parents can advice to you, and unless bad situation that sharing your hurts.
>>Parents can give you some advice, and unless it\'s a bad situation that sharing your hurts.
Same as i do, Almost telling to parents everything honestly.
>>Same as I do most of the time, I honestly tell my parents everything.
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