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HOMEWORK: What are some ways which gossip can be harmful?
honestly, gossip is not straight way, and It is lots of ways.
If you speaking about gossip with your friend, It can be harmful everyone.
gossip can be spread to other people directly.
So telling about gossip your friend or people is like a acting of betrayed.
Of course not every gossip is not bad.
They would be making friendship though gossip somebody, like a peer group.
Though this, They might be more closed and able to sharing their [이름]ds.
Finally, Telling gossip to someone is bad habit, and Try to changing your posture correctly.
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If you speaking about gossip with your friend, It can be harmful everyone.
So telling about gossip your friend or people is like a acting of betrayed.
They would be making friendship though gossip somebody, like a peer group.
Though this, They might be more closed and able to sharing their [이름]ds.
Finally, Telling gossip to someone is bad habit, and Try to changing your posture correctly.
>>Finally, telling some gossip to someone is a bad habit, try to change your posture correctly.
honestly, gossip is not straight way, and It is lots of ways.
>>Honestly, gossiping is not a straight way, and it can go lots of ways.
If you speaking about gossip with your friend, It can be harmful everyone.
>>If you talk about some gossips with your friend, it can be harmful for everyone.
gossip can be spread to other people directly.
>>Gossips can spread to other people directly.
So telling about gossip your friend or people is like a acting of betrayed.
>>So gossiping with your friend or other people is like an act of betrayal.
Of course not every gossip is not bad.
>>Of course not every gossip is bad.
They would be making friendship though gossip somebody, like a peer group.
>>They would be making friends through gossiping, like a peer group.
Though this, They might be more closed and able to sharing their [이름]ds.
>>Through this, they might be closer and able to share what\'s on their [이름]ds.
Finally, Telling gossip to someone is bad habit, and Try to changing your posture correctly.
>>Finally, telling some gossip to someone is a bad habit, try to change your posture correctly.
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