Homework.
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In my opinion, i am prefer to shop with other people.
It\'s because if shopping together, we can listening more opinion.we can get more good and useful item.
But bad thing is we have too many opinions.
So, we can\'t decided easily.
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Good afternoon, [이름]!^^
Well done in expressing your ideas through writing. You just have to practice more on your skills and make sure to capitalized all first letter of a word in a sentence and the \"I\" is always capitalized. Have a great day!^^
In my opinion, I prefer to shop with other people.
>>> In my opinion, i am prefer to shop with other people.
It\'s because if shopping together, we can listening more opinion.>>> It\'s because when shopping with someone, we have more or better opinion.
we can get more good and useful item.
>>>We can get better and useful items.
But bad thing is we have too many opinions.
But bad thing is we have too many opinions.
>>>But bad thing is, we can have too many opinions.
So, we can\'t decided easily.
So, we can\'t decided easily.
>>> So, we can\'t decide easily.
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