Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Eun Young
Time is flying so fast like a blink of an eye. I just hope this week is going smoothly with you!
You\'ve done a great job! I have to say, each passing day that we\'re having classes there are some changes in you. It may not lead you right away to the perfection and mastery of the language but at least you\'re getting there step by step! Never give up and just keep yourself motivated!
Take care!!!
T. Jeny
1. Maria worked very hard. She got the first prize. (so)
>>Maria worked very hard so she got the first prize.
2. Shyam was promoted. He was very hard working. (because)
>>Shyam was promoted because he was very hard working.
3. Mira was tired. She had been working for a long time. (because)
>>Mira was tired because she had been working for a long time.
4. He did not get the job. He lacked the qualifications. (because)
>>He did not get the job because he lacked the qualifications.
5. The teacher entered the classroom. The students got up. (when)
>>When the teacher entered the classroom, the students got up.
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