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2019-08-19 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer. Honestly, I\'ve never thought about this. But if I have to choose, I\'ll agree with attending classes. University students pay for their school fees and they have rights to learn from university. Why don\'t they attend classes? I can\'t understand. If they don\'t want to join the classes, why do they enter the university? There is a system for students who can\'t attend school for some reasons. They can apply for a leave of absence for a while, even 1 year. I recommend them to use that .

강사 첨삭

Good day Ms. [이름]~! ^^ That was fast. You made your homework so soon~! ^^ Anyway, as technology develops and ideas about learning change, there are many different opinions about whether it should still be mandatory for students to attend classes since they just simply surf the internet about their topics most of the time. In some countries, they let their students do modules instead but, of course as you said, it is for special purposes.

Have a nice day!

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

Honestly, I\'ve never thought about this. 

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But if I have to choose, I\'ll agree with attending classes. 

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University students pay for their school fees and they have rights to learn from university.

>>> CORRECT
Why don\'t they attend classes? I can\'t understand.

>>> CORRECT
If they don\'t want to join the classes, why do they enter the university?

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There is a system for students who can\'t attend school for some reasons.

>>> CORRECT

They can apply for a leave of absence for a while, even 1 year.

>>> CORRECT
 I recommend them to use that .

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