homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Before I do today\'s homework ,I have to make correct about last week my composition.
I told you there are three things we can never hide and trick.
Sneeze, cold and love. But these are sneeze , poverty and love.
Isn\'t it sad that I cannot hide poverty? Because I am already sad enough cause of povery.
-What is the biggest accomplishment in your personal life?- (^-^)
I can tell you right away without any hesitation.
It is my husband.
He always gives me love and cares about me more than I do for myself.
From time to time, he told me that he might save the world before this life becuae he met me.
But I told him \' No, you might save the universe\"
hahaha
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^ ^ I appreciate the time you put in your homework. ^^
It\'s so nice of you to give a correction. I appreciate it! ^ ^
You are one lucky woman for having met your husband! ^^
-Teacher Jedah
Before I do today\'s homework ,I have to make correct about last week my composition.
>>Before I do today\'s homework ,I would like to make a correction about last week\'s composition.
I told you there are three things we can never hide and trick.
I told you there are three things we can never hide and trick.
>>CORRECT
Sneeze, cold and love.
Sneeze, cold and love.
>>CORRECT
But these are sneeze , poverty and love.
>>CORRECT
Isn\'t it sad that I cannot hide poverty?
Isn\'t it sad that I cannot hide poverty?
>>CORRECT
Because I am already sad enough cause of povery.
>>Because poverty can not hide a person\'s sadness.
I can tell you right away without any hesitation.
>>CORRECT
It is my husband.
It is my husband.
>>CORRECT
He always gives me love and cares about me more than I do for myself.
He always gives me love and cares about me more than I do for myself.
>>CORRECT
From time to time, he told me that he might save the world before this life becuae he met me.
From time to time, he told me that he might save the world before this life becuae he met me.
>>CORRECT (misspelled \"because\" ^ ^ )
But I told him \' No, you might save the universe\"
hahaha
But I told him \' No, you might save the universe\"
hahaha
>>CORRECT
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