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Aside from chatting with your friends over a cup of coffee, what else do you do to spend time with your friends ?
Almost every morning, I have been exercising with my friend, and in the afternoon the way that I spend time is different from day after day. There are times when I do volunteer work with my friends at the church, when I study English with my friends, when I have a lunch with my friends. But ,sometimes , there is time when I would like to be alone.
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Happy Monday Bella,
Thank you for again taking time from your schedule to answer this question.
Keep on improving and soon you\'ll be very fluent..
Sincerely,
Teacher Annie
QUESTION:
Aside from chatting with your friends over a cup of coffee, what else do you do to spend time with your friends ?
Almost every morning, I have been exercising with my friend, and in the afternoon the way that I spend time is different from day after day.
>>>I have been exercising with my friend almost every morning.
While, I usually spend my afternoons in a different way every day.
There are times when I do volunteer work with my friends at the church, when I study English with my friends, when I have a lunch with my friends.
>>>There are times when I do volunteer work with my friends in the church.
Sometimes, I also study English with my friends or I grab some lunch with them.
But ,sometimes , there is time when I would like to be alone.
>>>But sometimes, I would just like to be alone.
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