Homework.
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In my opinion when the student behaved badly, in my school give a warning.
But if the student does not changed behave, call parents into school.
And going to we class.
We class is healing mental center.
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Thank you for your effort in answering your homework. Keep on practicing your grammar skills by going over your corrections. Anyway, you did a good job. ^_^
In my opinion when the student behaved badly, in my school give a warning.
>>> In my opinion, when students behave badly in my school, they will be given a warning.
But if the student does not changed behave, call parents into school. And going to we class.
But if the student does not changed behave, call parents into school. And going to we class.
>>> But, if a student does not change his behavior, he calls his parents into our school and he will be going to a We class.
We class is healing mental center.
We class is healing mental center.
>>> We class is a healing mental center.
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