homework
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HOMEWORK: What do you like least about your culture?
Korea have a little unique culture than other country, We called it human-[이름]d.
It is kind of human heart, For example, If you went to restaurant, waitress gave you more food.
Moreover, If you went to go store, It can be discount for you.
We called it human-[이름]d.
In Korea, We don\'t have a culture which giving tip to someone.
And, was been remained until now that accepted ancient culture.
Our history is almost 50 million years. So sometimes, We can see that wearing hanbok and eating [이름]chi from other country.
I\'m very proud myself which living in Korea.
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It is kind of human heart, For example, If you went to restaurant, waitress gave you more food.
Moreover, If you went to go store, It can be discount for you.
We called it human-[이름]d.
In Korea, We don\'t have a culture which giving tip to someone.
And, was been remained until now that accepted ancient culture.
Our history is almost 50 million years. So sometimes, We can see that wearing hanbok and eating [이름]chi from other country.
>>Our history is almost 50 million years old. So sometimes, we can see people wearing hanbok and eating [이름]chi from other countries.
I\'m very proud myself which living in Korea.
>>I\'m very proud that I live in Korea.
Korea have a little unique culture than other country, We called it human-[이름]d.
>>Korea have a little unique culture than any other country, We called it the human-[이름]d.
>>It is an emotion. For example, if you go to a restaurant, the waitress gave you more food.
Moreover, If you went to go store, It can be discount for you.
>>Moreover, if you go to go store, you will get a discount.
We called it human-[이름]d.
>>We called it the human-[이름]d.
In Korea, We don\'t have a culture which giving tip to someone.
>>In Korea, we don\'t have a culture of giving a tip to someone.
And, was been remained until now that accepted ancient culture.
>>And, it has remained until now that was accepted as part of our culture.
Our history is almost 50 million years. So sometimes, We can see that wearing hanbok and eating [이름]chi from other country.
>>Our history is almost 50 million years old. So sometimes, we can see people wearing hanbok and eating [이름]chi from other countries.
I\'m very proud myself which living in Korea.
>>I\'m very proud that I live in Korea.
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