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Healthy Day Ms. [이름]~!

These days, I have been talking about health to my students. I hope everyone of you would stay happy and healthy~! ^^

>>>TEACHER GEMMA

Hi~~ Gemma!
I\'d like to write about today\'s topic \"health\"
>>>CORRECT
The temperature was suddenly changed.

>>> The temperature has suddenly changed.

It becomes lower than before.

>>>CORRECT

On daytime, it\'s still hot. 

>>>CORRECT
But every morning and evening are cool.

>>> But every morning and evening is cold.

I\'m so sorry that Autumn get shorter and shorter.

>>>I feel sorry that autumn gets shorter and shorter

Winter comes soon.

>>> Winter is coming soon.
In between seasons, a daily temperature range get bigger. 

>>> In between seasons, a daily temperature range gets bigger. 
It causes a lot of cold patients.

>>> People catch a cold.

I\'m one of them. I\'m easy to catch a cold.

>>> I\'m one of them. I easily catch a cold.
Because I visit a hospital quite often, I have a tolerance with an antibiotics.

>>>> Because I visit a hospital quite often, I have a tolerance with antibiotics.
 So I bring extra clothes not to catch a cold whenever I go out.

>>>  So ,I bring extra clothes for me not to catch a cold whenever I go out.
Preventions is more important than treatment.

>>> Prevention is better than cure. :)