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2019-08-20 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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I don\'t trust person\'s first impressions. And i think that it is no relation to their character. It is often correct But it is usually wrong. I hear that my impression look cold. so people is difficuit to talk me. but i like to talk and have funny character. look! It\'s not right for me. *^^*

강사 첨삭

Hi there ~! ^^ Thanks for answering the question Ms. [Name]!

Keep it up!

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

I don\'t trust person\'s first impressions.
>>> CORRECT
And i think that it is no relation to their character.
>>> I think, it is not related to their character.
It is often correct But it is usually wrong.
>>> It is often correct however, it is usually wrong.
I hear that my impression look cold.
>>> I heard that my first impression looks cold.
so people is difficuit to talk me.
>>> So people are having difficulties talking to me.
but i like to talk and have funny character.
>>> But I like talking and have fun.
look! It\'s not right for me. *^^*

>>> Look! It\'s not right for me. *^^*

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