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2019-08-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

-What is the biggest accomplishment in your professional life?- (^-^) The biggiest accomplishment in my professinal life is still under way. I want to do my work until I retire.I may say it is the biggiest accomplishment in my life when I stop my working or retire. I have been working for 21years in this field therfore I don\'t have any regrets about my working. I want to compliment to myself how much you do your work well. Even I had to work on rainy days and snowy days, With this thoughts, I feel like crying. Let\'s applaud our life!!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for spending time with your homework. You are greatly appreciated. ^ ^

Me too! I guess my professional accomplishment is still on it\'s way! ^ ^ I hope, but if not, then it\'s okay. At least I can say, \"I tried! \"^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

The biggiest accomplishment in my professinal life is still under way.

>>The biggest accomplishment in my professional life is still under way. (CORRECT sentence, only misspelled \"biggest\" and \"professional\")
I want to do my work until I retire.

>>CORRECT

I may say it is the biggiest accomplishment in my life when I stop my working or retire.

>>I would say that the biggest accomplishment in my life is when I stop working or would retire.
I have been working for 21 years in this field therfore I don\'t have any regrets about my working.

>>I have been working for 21 years in this field therefore I don\'t have any regrets about my job.
I want to compliment to myself how much you do your work well.

>>I want to compliment myself for doing my work well.
Even I had to work on rainy days and snowy days, With this thoughts, I feel like crying.

>>I still go to work even on rainy and snowy days and sometimes the thought of it makes me cry.
Let\'s applaud our life!!

>>Let\'s applaud our lives! ^ ^

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