Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes i am. It\'s because others say happy things or funny things, i am happy and funny too.
If others angry or sad i am angry and sad too.
In my opinion others feeling is important.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!^^
You did a great job in expressing your thoughts through writing and it will help you to improve your skills. Keep it up!^^
Yes i am. It\'s because others say happy things or funny things, i am happy and funny too.
>>> Yes I do. It\'s because if others say happy or funny things, I am happy and having fun, too.
If others angry or sad i am angry and sad too.
>>> If others are angry or sad, I can be angry or sad, too.
In my opinion others feeling is important.
In my opinion others feeling is important.
>>> In my opinion, others feelings are important.
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