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2019-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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Yesterday, I worked a half day because I had an appointment with the dentist. From last sunday, I\'ve felt toothache on my bottom right side. I was afraid that I had a cavity that had to fill with. But it didn\'t. My probelm was gum. As peopea are getting older, gum is coming down. Some part of my gum came down. Thus, inside teeth came out a little bit. It causes my teeth aching. Fortunately(or not), I didn\'t need any treatment. He said usually time would solve that problem. I just let the time pass by. He recommended me not to use my bottom right side for a week. One week later, It will be allowed to use both side with soft foods and lukewarm drink. And then, after two weeks, I\'ll make an appointment with him. I hope my ache will be disappered soon... Becuase of Aging, my physical situation is changing. It\'s so sad. I\'m not ready to accept yet. But there is no way to avoid it. Ps. Gemma~~ please check the photo!!:)

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [이름]~! ^^ Thank you for your concern. I will try to look for this product. I\'m also worried with hair loss these days, Some people said it\'s normal to be having hair fall. I\'m scared though. Thanks a lot Ms. [이름].

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

Yesterday, I worked a half day because I had an appointment with the dentist.

>>> CORRECT
From last sunday, I\'ve felt toothache on my bottom right side.

>>> From last Sunday, I\'ve felt toothache on my right lower molar.
I was afraid that I had a cavity that had to fill with. But it didn\'t.

>>> CORRECT
My problem was  my gum.

>>> CORRECT

As people are getting older, gum is coming down. 

>>> CORRECT
Some part of my gum came down.

>>> CORRECT
Thus, inside teeth came out a little bit.

>>> CORRECT

It causes my teeth aching.

>>> CORRECT
Fortunately(or not), I didn\'t need any treatment.

>>> CORRECT
He said usually time would solve that problem.

>>> CORRECT
I\'ll just let the time pass by. 

>>> CORRECT
He recommended me not to use my bottom right side for a week. 

>>> He recommended me not to use my right lower molar for a week. 
One week later, I will be allowed to use both molars with soft foods and lukewarm drinks.

>>> CORRECT
 And then, after two weeks, I\'ll make an appointment with him.

>>> CORRECT
 I hope my ache will be disappered soon... 

>>>  I hope the pain will be relieved soon. 
Because of aging, my physical situation is changing. It\'s so sad.

>>> CORRECT
I\'m not ready to accept yet. But there is no way to avoid it.
>>> CORRECT
Ps. Gemma~~ please check the photo!!:)

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