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Hi there Ms. [이름]~! ^^ Thank you for your concern. I will try to look for this product. I\'m also worried with hair loss these days, Some people said it\'s normal to be having hair fall. I\'m scared though. Thanks a lot Ms. [이름].
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Yesterday, I worked a half day because I had an appointment with the dentist.
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From last sunday, I\'ve felt toothache on my bottom right side.
>>> From last Sunday, I\'ve felt toothache on my right lower molar.
I was afraid that I had a cavity that had to fill with. But it didn\'t.
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My problem was my gum.
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As people are getting older, gum is coming down.
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Some part of my gum came down.
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Thus, inside teeth came out a little bit.
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It causes my teeth aching.
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Fortunately(or not), I didn\'t need any treatment.
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He said usually time would solve that problem.
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I\'ll just let the time pass by.
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He recommended me not to use my bottom right side for a week.
>>> He recommended me not to use my right lower molar for a week.
One week later, I will be allowed to use both molars with soft foods and lukewarm drinks.
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And then, after two weeks, I\'ll make an appointment with him.
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I hope my ache will be disappered soon...
>>> I hope the pain will be relieved soon.
Because of aging, my physical situation is changing. It\'s so sad.
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I\'m not ready to accept yet. But there is no way to avoid it.
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Ps. Gemma~~ please check the photo!!:)
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