homework
학생이 쓴 원문
-What makes you angriest, the most frustrated, the most annoyed and why?- (^-^)
I am not easily angry with something so, I don\'t know what makes me angirest or frustrated.
Sometimes , When I feel hungy, I become little more sensitive.
And When I wait for my turn at a bank. I am little annoyed becuse the waitting time.
I am frustrated when I am stuck in traffic jam.
I am also annyed when people and children make noise at a restraurant.
I am angry with someone who insist their opinions strongly regardless of common sense.
Well, I am angry with manythings. I feel like a angry bird hihihi
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for this homework. I appreciate the effort! ^ ^
Thank you for your thoughts here too. I guess you are right, people could be angry with a lot of things, whether petty, simple or something serious. I also get angry with simple things but the most I\'m frustrated about right now is where I\'m at. Really; I wish I could be some place else more wonderful and happier! ^ ^ But, you know what they say, \"patience is a virtue\". Things will come into place eventually and I guess at this point there is no reason to be angry! ^^
-Teacher Jedah
I am not easily angry with something so, I don\'t know what makes me angirest or frustrated.
>>I don\'t get angry that easily, so I don\'t know what exactly makes me angriest or frustrated.
Sometimes , When I feel hungy, I become little more sensitive.
Sometimes , When I feel hungy, I become little more sensitive.
>>Sometimes, when I feel hungry, I become little a more sensitive. (be careful with your capitalization, your article \"a\" and spelling ^ ^)
And When I wait for my turn at a bank. I am little annoyed becuse the waitting time.
And When I wait for my turn at a bank. I am little annoyed becuse the waitting time.
>>And when I\'m waiting for my turn at the bank, I am little annoyed because time is so much wasted waiting.
I am frustrated when I am stuck in traffic jam.
I am frustrated when I am stuck in traffic jam.
>>I am frustrated when I am stuck in a traffic jam. (don\'t forget your article \"a\")
I am also annyed when people and children make noise at a restraurant.
I am also annyed when people and children make noise at a restraurant.
>>I am also annoyed when people and children make noise at a restaurant. (Correct sentence, only you misspelled \"annoyed\" and \"restaurant\" ^ ^)
I am angry with someone who insist their opinions strongly regardless of common sense.
I am angry with someone who insist their opinions strongly regardless of common sense.
>>I am angry with people who insist their opinions strongly regardless of common sense. (check your subject and verb agreement ^ ^ )
Well, I am angry with manythings.
Well, I am angry with manythings.
>>Well, I am angry with many things. (Correct sentence, don\'t forget your spacing ^ ^)
I feel like a angry bird hihihi
>>I feel like an angry bird. ^ ^
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