Homework
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1. downtown
On the weekend, I occasinally go to downtown for seeing movie.
2. set up
Recently I set up my computer\'s software.
3.apartment/ house/ detached house
I bought house that is a kind of a apartment.
But I want to buy a detached house with a large garden.
4. loan from a bank
If you have ability of making money, You can loan from a bank.
5. dangers of
It is dangers of game.
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1. downtown
On the weekend, I occasinally go to downtown for seeing movie.
>> I occasionally go downtown to see a movie on the weekends.
2. set up
Recently I set up my computer\'s software.
>> Recently, I set up my computer\'s software.
>> or: I recently set up my computer\'s software.
3.apartment/ house/ detached house
I bought house that is a kind of a apartment.
But I want to buy a detached house with a large garden.
>> I bought an apartment, but I want to buy a detached house with a large garden.
4. loan from a bank
If you have ability of making money, You can loan from a bank.
>> If you have an ability to make money, you can get a loan from a bank.
5. dangers of
It is dangers of game.
>> It is a dangerous game.
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