Homework
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Who is your best buddy? Why is he/she best buddy?
Jesus is my best buddy, and my family is also my best buddy. Because Jesus and my family are always with me. When I am young or old, when I am happy or sad, when I am healthy or sick, Jesus and my family are by me all the time.
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Happy Friday Bella,
I appreciate you taking time to answer this simple question. It\'s much appreciated.
Keep on improving for the best. Keep striving for the future to be better.
Wishing you a happy weekend as well, always take care of your health. Enjoy!
Sincerely,
Teacher Annie
Who is your best buddy? Why is he/she best buddy?
Jesus is my best buddy, and my family is also my best buddy.
Jesus is my best buddy, and my family is also my best buddy.
>>>Jesus is my number one best buddy and my family follows.
Because Jesus and my family are always with me.
>>>They are my best buddies because Jesus and my family are always with me.
When I am young or old, when I am happy or sad, when I am healthy or sick, Jesus and my family are by me all the time.
>>>When I am sad or happy, healthy or sick and no matter what happened to me; Jesus and my family are always on my side and they will never leave me.
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